Both Cheetahstar and our previous medicine cat Watermint are now gone, so there's a lot new going on in RavineClan. We could use more cats, but overall we're doing pretty good!
I am sorry to say that there will be an absence among our presence; I, Raven, will be taking a vacation for about two weeks. From the 18th to the 31st. You also should know that all mini-plots have been put off, seeing as Dark has returned! Celebrate! Don't forget to advertise, everyone, vitally important! ~Raven, Ineffable and Unforgettable Leader of TealClan~ 7/14/07
The new leader for RavineClan has been chosen: Fawkes! Congrats. ^^
During Dark's absence, Clan leaders are encouraged to think of a plot that will involve their Clan only.
Also, ADVERTISE! We could use some more active members. Post about the Dawn Clans on Neopets, other Proboards sites, or any other place that you can think of to find new members.
~Stormeh, Leader of CherryClan~
BrookClan need she-cats of any ages. We've got two she-cats total, including Fernstar. We are still without a medicine cat, so please apply.
The War is over, but is the danger past?
For many long season, a great war raged between the four Clans. Kits were murdered in their sleep; apprentices were slaughtered after only a few dawns of training; warriors were lucky to live to recieve their first apprentice. Clans went through leaders in a short matter of dawns instead of seasons. Finally, four leaders decided to end the War and save what remained of their Clans before all four Clans fell to injuries or illness. With the threat gone, the Clans began to grow again.
But does the threat remain, or is the peace permanant?
A small black and light gray colored, she-cat. With beautiful gray-blue right eye. A slivery white left eye. a medium sized cat.
Appearance:
SilentStorm, is a strong lean, power she-cat. She is quite wise, and wisdom marks every fiber of her being. Her fur is mainly black for the exception of light gray fur marks her paws, and ears. A large gray star lines her right eye. On her left eye she has a long scar, in the shape of a crest moon. Her tail is long, and some wide with a gray line going under her tail. Her eyes are odd, with the exception of her normal blue right eye. Her left eye was wounded and ever truly healed, hence she is half blind in it, also this eye is a gray instead of blue. SilentStorm has had her fights over her lifetime that included much blood and gore. She has several long or deep scars. One marking her right hind leg, when she fought her father for her freedom. Her scars tell of a bruised warrior that lives to prove and survive in this cruel world. Her muzzle is slightly pointed, with long fangs, her left fang chipped to a slanted curve. Her legs are long and elegant, with light streaks of gray marking her upper hind legs.
Personality:
Silentstorm, was given her name for two reasons. One: She is not one for talk, hence she is silent and deadly. Two: She is a great hunter and warrior, she fights with sheer power and no normal cat or warrior suite can win in an average fight. She is rude, and buck. She tends to lead, and will lead if she can find herself leading. She is kind, honorable, and willing. She is one who will think about her actions before acting in haste. She has a weakness for kits, and will lay down her life without thinking about the subject any longer. She is kind, yet is rash with much reasoning. She is one who will fight for her clan, and never betray them. Her motto is one stating that a traitor deserves to die... like the coward that they really are. With her strong body, and willing mind, she makes a wise and valuable warrior. She is calm and collective, but her attitude will rarely act, but when it does it should be feared. Her heart is loving and delicate, yet after being caught by a male cat, and abused she has never trusted her heart again. She is mateless and wants to continue so, that is the reason she is rude to males.
History:
Silentstorm, was born upon rouges. Kit-Hood: Within her litter was only another girl. Silentstorm was a mild, welcoming Kit, who spent most of her days with the Medicine Cats or the wise Elders who had been thrown out from their clans. She was under the protection of her mother until her apprenticeship. She worked hard learning from the old and wise, and even helped warriors with tasks that Apprentices where apposed to help with. Apprentice-Hood After her Kit-hood ended she was mentored by her father. Her father however wished for a son, and raised Silentstorm with pure untamed rage. He taught her how to survive, instead of learning her duty's from her mother learning to be a she-cat and a mother, her father raised her into the cat she is today. She has always listened to her peers and always respected the stronger cats among the rouges. For her silence over the years, her father worked her harder and harder. In her seventh moon she could fight male cats and beat them with ease. In her ninth moon, she left the rouges after killing her father in a duel for her freedom. Her sister Divinequeen, became a medicine cat within the rogues, yet refused to leave the RogueClan she has always known. Silentstorm after years of living hard in a Rouge Clan decides to find a real clan. Warrior-Hood After killing her father, now lost within a cruel land. She searches for a clan that she would lay down her life and legacy for. Now Silentstorm runs free, hoping others won't judge her for her for her past....The last clan she found attacked her for being a rogue in the past, blaming her for the attack on the clan. After she was banished and wounded to a terrible extent, the clan realized the traitor was no other then their so called loyal deputy.
Joined: Feb 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 899 Location: Wait.... Where am I again? Karma: 15
Re: Silentstorm||Female||Brookclan « Reply #1 on Oct 16, 2007, 10:34pm »
I'd like to start out by saying, WELCOME! ^^ We haven't had any new members in a while, so it's nice to meet you!
A few things with your bio... None of these are too terribly big, but I wanted to point them out so you could make sure to keep them from happening in actual roleplay...
Your history has a tendancy of switching from past tense into present tense. Ex: Her sister Divinequeen, became a medicine cat within the rogues, and refuses to leave the Clan she has always known. Which tense were you intending to keep it in?
Actually, I think that's it... Hmm. Lookin' good. I thought I'd closed BrookClan to applications a while ago, but I'll accept this one because Silentstorm seems a bit more likely to be accepted by Fernstar. BrookClan is going through a rough time with a bad drought and many, many cats. Although she dislikes having yet another mouth to feed, Fernstar would easily see that this she-cat could help the clan more than hinder it.
Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 16 Location: *+*Dancing in moonlight.*+* Karma: 0
Re: Silentstorm||Female||Brookclan « Reply #2 on Oct 17, 2007, 12:34pm »
Thanks, for pointing that out. Sometimes I twist through the tenses without realizing it. x.x Also, thanx for the welcome. :] So, now. I should just post on clan lands?